hi dr.khaled:i just do not understand your comment about what i wrote & i am a little bit confused..is this part good and i should add to it from the answer to reem's question?or is it totally wrong & i should delete it and write it all over again?...thanks.
COMMENTS: It is good. But you need to make your sentences shorter, and use what the authors say in order to establish their style: formal or informal. It is good and can be better. Go ahead with the next part.
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